Discussing Effects-2 revise

There will be a large factory which will have several effects on a small town called Acton.  First of all, a great number of jobs will be open for the residents.  Consequently, it can improve the economic development of the small town.  Besides, it will bring a lot of people to the community.  Because of that, the local authorities will build more public facilities.  Last but not the least, there will be more modern structures and they can change the small town a lot instead of remaining the original appearance.  To sum up, if the owner of the large factory decides to build it at the small town, it will be a good chance for the citizens to have a good life.