Discussing Cause-1 revise

After I graduated from the junior high school, I decided to major in English at National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School.  There are some reasons why I chose the major.  First of all, when I was a eight-year-old boy, I was interested in English a lot.  And I always felt excited when I saw foreigners walking on the street.  In addition, because of globalization, English becomes the main language all over the world and more and more important.  As a result, English is a principal rule to make friends from other countries, have successful business, and so on.  Last but not the least, I am a man full of adventure, and I have a dream of being a backpacker traveling around the world.  I know that it is necessary to have the ability which can speak English fluently and read English smoothly.  In short, I think choosing English as a major is a wonderful decision, and I will continue to study it hard.