Staying healthy can be easy. First, you should know your own standard Body Mass Index. Adults standard , for example, range from 18.5 to 23. Then, take regular exercises every week, which can help you lose weight easily. After that, what you eat is of central importance. You'd better not to have fast food very often, or you'll be fatter and fatter. Next, you should learn how to relax yourself after an exhausted day. For example, you can listen to soft music, watch movies, go shopping, chat with your friends, and so on. With all these steps completed, it's time to have a healthy life.
吃速食前面那裡要不要也加個 for example?
回覆刪除然後除了不要吃速食以外 要不要也補充吃什麼會比較好
結論感覺還不賴
回覆刪除還有你的標點間隔有點怪
其他舉例子的都還不錯
Then, take regular exercises every week,
回覆刪除regular 是不是改成 regularly 比較好
BMI不是有分男女?如果描述出來會有更多字數哦^^
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