Future perspectives-revised

I will still choose English as my major in college, for I am really interested in speaking English.  National Yunlin University of Science and Technology is the university that I want to enter most because of  their wonderful campus, excellent teachers and quality facilities.  The Department of Foreign Language offers all kinds of English-related courses so that I absolutely can make a massive progress in English.  I am good at translating English into Chinese; consequently, I hope that I can become an great translator one day.  To persue my goal, I need to enhance my English as much as possible.  I usually improve my English abilities in some weys, including reading English magazines such as Advanced and Studio Classroom every day, having a conversation with my American friends in English every week, and writing three articles in English a week.  Therefore, I can get more fluency and proficiency in English.  Moreover, after I graduate from the university, I will study abroad to sharpen my English and broaden my horizon.  Hence, to realize my dream, I really hope that I can be admitted to your university.