2011年5月25日 星期三

Expressing an Opinion-2

A lot of schools have the rule to go to school in uniform.  As a student, I don't think that it is a good way.  First of all, when it is a summer day, it will be very uncomfortable to ride a bike in uniform.  Furthermore, it is not convenient for girls to ride a bike in skirt.  Next, if students have to wear uniform everyday, they will have to wash it everyday.  That may be a trouble for them.  Finally, I think the sport shirts are better than uniform, because they make student more comfortable and convenient.  To sum up, I hope the schools can change the rule.

4 則留言:

  1. 注意單複數
    如果是單數 定冠詞別忘了

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  2. First of all, when it is a summer day, it will be very uncomfortable to ride a bike in uniform.

    可以穿運動服啊, 這裡的制服應該是指一樣的衣服,不是每間學校都要穿制服到校的吧

    have to wear uniform everyday everyday要分開吧

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  3. 單複數而已

    其他都可以哦:)

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