2011年4月20日 星期三
My favorite season
I love the feeling that the wind blows through my face,and that can make me feel wonderful. Therefore, spring is my favorite season. There are more than one reason why I like spring. First of all, the weather in spring is not extremely hot and cold. Because my body will sweat a lot whenever I do exercises, I don't like the hot weather especially. Secondly, plenty of flowers will blossom during those three months instead of withering. As a result, not only can I appreciate various kinds of colorful flowers and luxuriant trees, but I don't need to sweep a legion of fallen leavies from trees at school. Last but not the least, spring is the main reason of harvest. Therefore, vagetables and fruit in spring are always cheaper than in any other season. Because of that reason, I can usually have delicious meals. To sum up, I am certainly sure that spring is the best season in my mind because of the reasons I mentioned.
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第一句感覺風很舒服~
回覆刪除兩三句帶出來的感覺還不錯
leavies 是落葉嗎 拼錯了
大概都還不錯 滿流暢
spring is the main reason of harvest 不是秋天嗎
回覆刪除not only can I appreciate various kinds of colorful flowers and luxuriant trees, but I don't need to sweep a legion of fallen leavies from trees at school.
回覆刪除Not only...but also 是要接對等的詞性 所以but後面 用can't會比較好吧?
內容很好 很豐富! 第一句真詩情畫意
第一句帶出後面的文章很棒哦:)
回覆刪除fallen leavies ...fallen leaves哦
很棒哦哈哈
hot or cold比較好
回覆刪除大致上還不錯:D
NICE 有讓我感覺到 秋天到了 可惜現在快夏天了....
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